The Ontario Poetry Society Presents

The Ted Plantos Memorial Award

2007 Winner: Debbie Okun Hill


Judge's Remarks
"The poems by Debbie Okun Hill in her chapbook manuscript, Swaddled in Comet Dust, reflect the aspirations and vulnerability of a writer at the outset of her literary career. Fear of rejection and the thrill arising from acceptance are captured in the lyrical flurries of a self-reflective poetics."

John B. Lee,
Poet Laureate of Brantford


Congratulations to Debbie Okun Hill, in recognition of being selected the 2007 recipient of The Ted Plantos Memorial Award.

Poems from Swaddled in Comet Dust

A Writer's Holiday Miracle

With thin stroke of gold ink Comet curls inspired by Sparkle gel pen She leans Breathless Over wicker desk In empty stable Her labour, panting Gives birth to a star Five points of view Spinning tails in circles Cosmic brilliance Shared with three wise men Her thoughts twinkling from An angel's wand Her feather quill A silver moon Skating words on a Black velvet palette Until shepherd's Sandstorm Dust flake footprints Drift, settle into A-muse-ing stories The starlet embryos Still cradled in her mind

Re*jec*tion Slip

He stares at her Addresses her formally From a crisp white suit Pressed pocket His handkerchief Neatly folded Envelope-shaped Concealing his decision She stares back, vulnerable Contemplates her feelings Sweaty palms fingering His stark face, a dark type Eyes like commas Pausing, hesitating A mark, unlike lipstick Stamped to his forehead She opens up, massages his back Loosens his tie, his tongue And inside the folds Black ink scratches his words Like a c-r-a-c-k-l-i-n-g voice Over a s-t-a-t-i-c phone A fragment, thin skin of paper Peeling, revealing the rejection His decision, so sorry clinging Like a single rain drop ready to splatter She turns away, eyes moist Clasping yours truly, sincerely Tightly against her breast
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