The Ontario Poetry Society Presents
The Ted Plantos Memorial Award
2007 Winner: Debbie Okun Hill
Judge's Remarks
"The poems by Debbie Okun Hill in her chapbook manuscript, Swaddled in Comet Dust, reflect the aspirations and vulnerability of a writer at the outset of her literary career. Fear of rejection and the thrill arising from acceptance are captured in the lyrical flurries of a self-reflective poetics."
— John B. Lee,
Poet Laureate of Brantford
Congratulations to Debbie Okun Hill, in recognition of being selected the 2007 recipient of The Ted Plantos Memorial Award.
Poems from Swaddled in Comet Dust
A Writer's Holiday Miracle
With thin stroke of gold ink
Comet curls inspired by
Sparkle gel pen
She leans
Breathless
Over wicker desk
In empty stable
Her labour, panting
Gives birth to a star
Five points of view
Spinning tails in circles
Cosmic brilliance
Shared with three wise men
Her thoughts twinkling from
An angel's wand
Her feather quill
A silver moon
Skating words on a
Black velvet palette
Until shepherd's
Sandstorm
Dust flake footprints
Drift, settle into
A-muse-ing stories
The starlet embryos
Still cradled in her mind
Re*jec*tion Slip
He stares at her
Addresses her formally
From a crisp white suit
Pressed pocket
His handkerchief
Neatly folded
Envelope-shaped
Concealing his decision
She stares back, vulnerable
Contemplates her feelings
Sweaty palms fingering
His stark face, a dark type
Eyes like commas
Pausing, hesitating
A mark, unlike lipstick
Stamped to his forehead
She opens up, massages his back
Loosens his tie, his tongue
And inside the folds
Black ink scratches his words
Like a c-r-a-c-k-l-i-n-g voice
Over a s-t-a-t-i-c phone
A fragment, thin skin of paper
Peeling, revealing the rejection
His decision, so sorry clinging
Like a single rain drop ready to splatter
She turns away, eyes moist
Clasping yours truly, sincerely
Tightly against her breast
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